She is like a guitar, She would play to your music. But when you treat her improperly, She may also cause cuts and bruises.
She is like a sword, Shields you in trouble. But if you play with her, She can hurt you worse.
She is like a fire, Just as holy and sacred. But when you touch her inappropriately, The burns are on your way.
She is like a memory, which makes your heart skip a beat. She is like a dictionary, which you can never completely read.
She is a miracle, That you will always know. She will be your strength when low, She will be your weakness too.
#dedicated to the strongest she in my life. You inspire me.
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Thank you lisha!
Is it properly visible ?
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you so much sir.!
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Yeah….
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Tysm. ๐
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amazing ๐
and i guess that she in your life is your mom , ๐
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My mom and my best friend. ๐
Thank you so much ๐
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my pleasure ๐
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Every woman
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In my life it was asked? So I gave my answer as it was my personal essay. Rest, yes every woman deserves to be loved the same way.
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All ‘she’ involved in my life and everyone’s life deserve to read this….
My thoughts abt them will always be like yours….๐
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Thank you so much. I am glad we share a mutual string of thoughts.
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Ya..we do… But foe that matter i think all must feel the same… To change world…โบ
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This is just a little contribution by my side to express the class and standard of women. I hope it spreads.
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Ya.it will…
This is a nice move by you…
Bless you..๐
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Tysm โบ
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You are most welcomeโบโบ
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So let’s create a world where she can be only the first part of every stanza and the need to turn to second part never comes. Let’s make the world a safer place for her so won’t have to think before falling in love , before trusting a person and going out at night alone.
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Wow!!! Loved it … Great..*speechless*๐ค
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Thank you
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Every ‘she’ is important in broad concept. Instead of confining she in just one part of stanza, let her make a part of each line of every stanza. Let her create her own world where she would like to live. And let her express herself the way she would like to.
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No doubt that I want the world to work like that
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Next time if anyone asks me about the kind of girl i am looking to be with, i shall show them this beautiful piece of yours.
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Oh god.! That was a huge compliment. Thank you so much. I am very happy you liked it.
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We are the passengers of the same boat. I hope to see more works by you in future.
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I will work hard to stand true by your hopes. Thank you for reading. ๐
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Take a bow.
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Beautiful ๐๐๐
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Thank you.
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You are always welcome๐๐๐
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Incredible.
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Thank you mam.!
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The more I read it, the more I feel the urge to read it again. I am very happy and equally proud to be the ‘she’ for you. I can’t explain how much nonbelligerent do I feel right now.
And yes, I agree that every women should become that she.
I loved it Bobo. It has no match. I am very very proud of you. ๐๐
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This was just a token of my thanks for you. Thank you for inspiring.
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I read it before sleeping and open it after waking up. So I am more thankful ๐
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๐๐๐๐๐
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Yes, I am late. I am sorry๐๐
But it is my bad luck. I was late for such a beautiful experience.
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Ought to be sorry. But I love you. ๐
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A complete woman, that’s who she is… Beautiful description
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YESS…That she is a woman with class. Thank you for reading.
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You’re welcome ๐
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I see that you came to visit and left a follow; I am doing the same.
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Thank you.
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Nicely done
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Tysm โบ
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That’s a wonderful dedication Bhavika! Congratulations and keep it up ๐
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Thank you so much. Means alot. !!
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Pleasure ๐
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amazing really amazing ๐๐
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Thank you Manisha. Tysm.
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Wow I love it ๐
Keep it ๐ up
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Thank you so much. ๐
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Thanks so much for following my. Blog!
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Pleasure is all mine !
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Check out, Iโve mentioned you.
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Hey thank you so much. It means alot.
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anytime.
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Very good thought… an empowered woman is described well.
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Thank you so much. Keep reading ๐
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Beautiful description ๐
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You know what..You made my day. This is the first thing I am seeing in the morning. Thank you so much.๐๐
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well, it looks pretty messed up, yet seems beautiful!
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Well,sometimes WordPress app screws your presentation well. Yet, thank you ! ๐
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yeah i’ve faced that!
yer most welcome!!
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Awesome! I loved it!
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Means alot.! Hope you like other posts too. ๐
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Yah!I love them and will be pass by to read this blog.
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Beautiful! โค
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Thank yo so much ! Means alot ๐
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I absolutely LOVE this!!
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Thank you so much Leona! Read the first part also. Maybe you will like it too. ๐
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So creative!!
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Thank you so much! Means a lot Christy. โบ
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WOW
I know playing Guiter is easy but be sure your are playing with Strings….๐
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Yeah! So true. โบ๏ธ
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Hello there,
Thankyou so much for coming to my blog and appreciating my work!
Your blog is an open forum about simple yet vital human traits, gracefully portrayed ๐
This poem itself is very powerful, written with courage yet softness.
Keep writing!
Be you, everybody else is taken. (Not my quote) โค
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I will sure be myself as long as people like you exist to appreciate organic nature.
Thank you for stopping by and reading my work. It honestly means a lot. ๐
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Beautifully crafted
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Thanks a lot!
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My pleasure
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you so much.
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Welcome.dear.
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Most welcome.
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Beautiful and astonishing this is.
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Thank you dearie. ๐
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Powerful post!
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Thank you so much.
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Effeัtively like Mommy mentioned, whhen we love ฮฟone another
and lโฒve tาปe world that Jesus died for, that?s
a form of worship. After we take into considerะฐtion God and lissten to the sermon or in Sแฅnday Faculty, that?s a means of worshipping as a result of weะณe learning how grะตat God is and He likะตs that.
Or when we sit around and tell eะฐch other what the best isัuะตs about God are.
You know าปoow much you โ ผike hearing folks say hะพw ัensible or cute าฏou boys
aะณe? Properly God likes once we talk collectively about how nice he is.?
Daddy answered.
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She is love
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Indeed!
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So beautiful ๐๐ especially the last stanza “she will be your strength when low , she will be your weakness too” ๐ I just loved the way you wrote it . “She” ought to be respected and loved
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Absolutely. Every “she” deserve an unconditional respect and love. Thanks a ton for this wonderful comment. Please keep visiting. โบ๏ธ
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Would be my pleasure your posts are lovely keep writing
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Your posts are all adorable too. Please keep visiting. It will be a pleasure to know your feedbacks on my posts.โบ๏ธ
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Interesting
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Thank you.
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Wc
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Good. Memory and dictionary doesnโt go together.
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Indeed! Thank you for a read. Please keep visiting. โบ๏ธ
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I mean not literally. Poetically, these two words are not in sync like your other lines. Hope you would take it as CC โบ๐
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Oh! Yeah. Thankyou.
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Please visit my blog…
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Oh! I sure will.
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Great post bhavika…i love the way you expressed tyour idea!
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Thankyou. I hope you like my recent post “Happiness”. Enjoy here! Happy blogging.! โบ๏ธ
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Awesome
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Wow! Thankyou so much. Honestly means alot. โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ
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Such a lovely piece.you started the poem powerfully and ended the same way. The only line which was different from other lines was ‘she is like a dictionary which you can never completely read’. And it’s my fav line.Brought smiles๐๐
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I am glad you liked it. Keep reading ๐
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Keep writing๐
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As long as I have readers like you, I’ll definitely keep writing. โบ๏ธ
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Wow. Your she is lucky. ๐
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