I met a gorgeous woman, Lady with beautiful eyes. Gifted with a beautiful smile, Wrapped in the silent cries.
She is a gem of human,
Her inner covered with diligence.
Her heart filled with compassion,
Being the epitome of intelligence.
That lady be the most amiable,
Her laughter, the most beautiful sound.
She is my favorite face,
who makes my world go round.
She suffers alone from all the pain,
From her, the inspiration is born.
She plays so many roles,
Her real self is constantly torn.
She be the need to all,
Desire to some, and burden to none.
She is a darling daughter
None less than a doting son.
She is hard from exterior,
But has the softest heart.
The girl is mirror to your goodness,
Perfect, adorable and smart.
She fought with the devils,
Returned back from the hell.
She faced it with all her might,
In heaven, she is meant to dwell.
I wish you come back SOON, Without you, I have become insane. Maybe I’ll never be yours again, But you will always be my Superwoman.
Lovely words
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Thankyou so much. ☺️☺️
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You’re welcome
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Very Nice
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Thankyou Ajay ji☺️
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Wow! Beautiful
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Thankyou so much dear☺️
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Touched my heart!
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Thankyou so much. 😊😊
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Pleasure is mine 😉
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Amazing meri Jaan.
You are growing with each post. I am very happy for you😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️
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Wowwww! Thankyou so much Radz! Stay blessed dear. ☺️❤️
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A true Superwoman indeed! A beautiful ode Bhavika 👌
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Thankyou so much ma’am ☺️
Means alot. 😊
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Wrapped in silent cries ❤ we all know that Superwoman
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Indeed! ☺️ thankyou so much for stopping by. ☺️
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Wow that’s something beautifully described
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Thankyou so much. Means a ton! 😊
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What should I say💓
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Haha! I would definitely say thank you so much 😊
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Great post girl.. Good work very thoughtful
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Thankyou sweetie.! 😊
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Aww..
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Amazing writing 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻 i liked the drawing also. 😍
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Thankyou so much Rohit!
Drawing is not mine though.! ☺️😂
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No worries ☺️ just liked that so mentioned ☺️ btw u deserved that for post also 😇😇
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How sweet! Thankyou so much. ☺️
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Beautiful lines dear,
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Thankyou so much ma’am. ☺️
Means alot.
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Ahhhaaa!Too lovely.People here are true.you are growing with every post dear.Last para was very nice.It seemed wonderful especially in that bold letters
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Wow! Finally!
Thankyou so much! I love your comments.! They mean so much. ☺️
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Beautifully described
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Thankyou so much. 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much dear 😊
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A superhero indeed. This was beautiful, you too are a superwoman too.
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Wow! Thankyou so much sir! Loved your comment. 😊
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Welcome.🌹
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WOW!!
Its me who is hypnotized by your comment. Yeah! It can be dedicated to the superwoman is once life, say it mother or sister or anyone else.
Thankyou so much for such a lovely comment.! Please keep visiting. 😊😊
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Yeaaaahhhh.. I don’t know what Happened. I didn’t do anything. 😞😞
It just disappeared like that. 😒
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Yeah.. I tried. But its not in my blog posts too. Itni mehnat se likha tha..
I have to type it all again. 😔😓😓
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Penned it so beautifully…mesmerizing.
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Thankyou so much. 😊😊
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Such fulfilling lines! Full of expression! (◕‿◕)
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Thankyou Angel. ❤️
It truly means alot.
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Hello, thanks for the follow, I am now following your blog now. I was really knocked out by the this very first piece I read. I am looking forward to reading more. You are multi-talented. Nice to meet you.
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Thanks a ton! Your blog is awesome!
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Thank YOU, so is yours. I have to catch up on your posts. I want to read more of it.
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That really sweet of you. Would love to have your feedbacks.
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I will hopefully get to do that soon. I have been so busy, and am falling behind on my blog. I need oto get back in the groove.
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😊😊
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You girls got some different world…
Very well written 🙂 😉
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Thankyou so much ☺️
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That’s so awesome !!
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Thankyou so much ☺️☺️
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Is this dedicated to someone…because if it is then that person would be soo glad reading your heart in those lines
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Yes of course, every post has an inspiration behind it! I hope this makes her happy. ☺️
Thankyou for your kind words. ☺️
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My pleasure
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👏👏
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Thankyou. ☺️
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I have nominated you for the Real Neat Blog Award. You can check it out: https://www.livingvsexisting.com/real-neat-blog-award/
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Thankyou so much Cherylene. You are such a great soul. ☺️
I am overwhelmed. 😊
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🙂 thank you but it was my pleasure!
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😊😊
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🙂
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Lovely as always… 😃 This brought tears to my eyes. Thankyou for sharing this. *Happy* *happy* may God bless you… You are another kind of superwoman. 😊😊
Saw that sketch after a long time. 😉
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Haha! I know, and I am very happy that it made you happy. ☺️
I’ll be waiting for yet another sketch. 😂😉
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I think I can do it for you in couple days now. 😊 P.S. check my blog
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Yaaaayyyyy!! I’ll be waiting. 😀😀
P. S. I love you for that. 😍
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U are my Superwoman. Along with it, I believe u r a superhuman.Constantly trying to make everyone happy is Smthin only u can do
I loved ur post n I love you ❤️😘😘
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Wow! I didn’t know you will read this post and more so, you will comment. Thank you for taking out time for this. You made me happy. Stay blessed and please giving good comments now. 😂😊😊
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Why it is like… I can’t think of all these mesmerizing words? Why can’t I frame such awesome emotions?
Why can’t my hands sketch out feelings?
I realized that some people are really blessed to have all such talents…
I always pray that this society is full of writers, friends, daughters, sisters like you…
You are indeed a personality 😉
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Wow.. Wow.. Wow.. I am overwhelmed. I hope we have more motivators like you.
You can think words like these because you are meant to think some unique and better words. I am so thankful utkarsh. Means a ton! ☺️
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Motivators!! Ya i can motivate others but can’t motivate myself even to wake up early and study😂😂
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Hahaha.. You don’t need motivation but actually superpower to do that. 😂😂😂
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Oh yes, you got it😂😂
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So wonderful words. She must be adorable.
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Yes, she is. Thankyou so much. 😊
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Good one bhavika 😍
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Thankyou dearie. ☺️
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This is beautiful
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Thankyou so much. ☺️
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I like to Nominate You for this award.
https://akshaykumarphysics.wordpress.com/2017/07/02/blue-sky-tag-blog-award-my-first-nomination/
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I feel extremely happy and overwhelmed. Thank you so much. ☺️
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Your welcome 🙂 have a Joyful time 😉
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I got Nominated for Two awards.. on same day.. These are my first nomination.. hence I’m nominating same bloggers for both awards.
In which Nominated ypu also…
All the best 😉 🙂 😉
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Oh my God.! Thanks a ton! 😊😊
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शाबाश | हम सबको तुम्हारे उपर अभिमान है|
बहुत खूबसूरत |
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Thankyou.. Thankyou.. Thankyou so much! Aapka hi wait kar rahi thi mai aaj tak!
Thankyou kaka☺️❤️
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Wonderfully written, Bhavika. 😍😍😘
I can feel the words. They are so powerful. And I’m sorry to share my perspective but somehow it reminded me of our moms, isn’t it Bhavika.
As you’ve sweetly described things about that woman who tolerates so many things, thought she can manage to have a smile on her face. 😍😘
I’m completely in love with this piece. 💕
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Why are you sorry for sharing your perspective! I would love to read it.
Thankyou so much! Yes, this is dedicated to someone yet is a generalized version for all the women out there. Specially our moms.
I am so very happy that you liked it! This was the best comment to end my day. Thanks a bunch dear😊😊
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Yayyyy! I could comment on this too? Wohooo💕💕😘
Aur thank you so much for sharing your views back. Respect to all the wonderful women, including the one I’m talking with right now. 😘😘💕😊
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I guess.. I Have to frame a poem titled “superman” to thank all the wonderful men including the one I am talking to right now. Haha😂😊
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Awww… Please do haan. I’m ready and excited to read that masterpiece 😍
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Hahaha! Done! You will be the first one I would send link to. 😀👍
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I’m waiting for that to happen soon Bhavika 💟
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Wow! Amazing yar.! Sooner sooner! I promise.
☺️
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Thanks for the follow 🙂
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My pleasure. 😊
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Awww that’s so sweet 😘😊💐 Such a lovely poem and such a lovely person indeed.
Just stopped by to thank you very much for the follow 😊 I truly appreciate it and I’m happy to meet you 🤗💐
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Thankyou so much for stopping by. 😊means alot. ☺️
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You are very welcome dear 😄💐
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To whom it is…I can’t get this…😐
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A friend.! ☺️
And also to all the women in general. They all are a superwoman somewhere. ☺️
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Okay…I don’t receive notification from your blog…but never worry…I visit twice or thrice to see if I had or have missed…
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Wow.. You are amazing. Means alot. ☺️☺️
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☺
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I have nominated you for the Unique Blogger Award. Please feel free to check it out. https://www.livingvsexisting.com/unique-blogger-award-2/
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Wow! Thankyou so much again! You are such a darling! ☺️☺️
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My pleasure! 🙂
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Nominated you for an award. http://wp.me/p7BbJN-1C
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Thank you! I’ll definitely check it out. 🙂
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It’s beautiful poem dear.A nice tribute to friendship ,it seems. Bcoz you said frnds forever.😊
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Thankyou so much 🙂
Means alot. Keep visiting.
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Yes,Sure dear😊
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Thank you so much for the follow. May God bless you more abundantly in the name of Jesus Christ.
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Thanks a ton. 😊
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Lovely dedication to your friend.She is my favourite face who makes my world go round..that line just spoke so much than the words. Loved it.
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Many thanks to you for spending time here.
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You’re Welcome.
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This is beautiful
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Thankyou so much. 😊
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You’re welcome
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Beautifully written! She sounds like the inspirational muse of all us artists. Well done!
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Haha! Well, yeah. She always wanted to be an inspiration. And she really is. ☺️ she will be happiest to read this comment, I am sure. 😀
Thankyou so much.
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Every woman is a superwoman just like u….. Incredible
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I hope you mean it. 😂😂
Thanks a ton.!
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Heart warming poetry with the heart in the right place! So loving, so beautiful it can be! I love this kind of poetry as well as the love I find in your words because it comes straight from your heart!
Lovely regards, Heidi
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Thankyou for such a wonderful comment. I am glad you liked it! Keep visiting. 😊
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This is amazing dear❤️
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Means alot! Thankyou soo much. 😄
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Beautiful 🌹
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Means alot.! Thankyou for stopping by. 😊
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Such a heart touching poem.. lovely.. I liked it a lot.
I am new here and have written a few poems. please do give them a read and share your valued feedback. I hope you will like them. 😊😋
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/01/your-eyes/
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Will surely visit you dear. And thankyou for visiting me. I am glad you liked it. Stay in touch. 😊
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Sure😊 hope you will like my work 🤞😊
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You reach the core of one’s soul in your writings. They are raw, unfiltered and real. You have a way of expressing your thoughts with truth and honesty in your poetry. I admire your bravery. Highly recommended.
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I am glad if I could reach your heart. That’s the safest place I could have in anyone’s life. ❤️
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