Carefree whispers!      

Yes, it begun with a conversation we shared,

Followed by a connection, unprepared.

Discussion of mutual likes and dislikes,

Lead to the opening of new files. 

I was lost in the person so genuine,

He slowly controlled all my laughs and grins. 

He held me strong with all his might, 

And then came an unsaid fight. 

I left to protect us from a ruin,

A flying balloon encountered a tiny pin. 

Our inner world was all shattered, 

Happiness, smiles and peace, all scattered. 

Then, came a moment I realized, 

I am into a love trap, I always despised. 

I ran to him and held him tight, 

Our dark world was followed by a light. 

Gradually, we found our way out. 

And became each other’s whereabout.

And finally, I am reserved,

With the best one I deserved. 

And with the passing night that we share,

We giggle and spread carefree whispers in air. 

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54 thoughts on “Carefree whispers!      

  1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

    Wow dear.. It’s so beautiful..made me emotional😊😊…
    Glad to know you got someone who makes you happy.. He makes you happy or should I just break his jaw? 🙄
    God bless you..
    Keep writing..
    And congratulations 💕💐💐 Ms. Reserved..🔐😊😊
    Ms. Or Mrs.?

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    1. Heart to soul. Post author

      Thankyou so much! Well yeah, he makes me happy and adds up to my existing happiness. Oh well, I would complain when he fails at this, then you can break his jaw. Ps:- that time would never come. God forbid. You, stay blessed too. Hahaha. Reality wise a miss, and an imaginary Mrs. Keep reading. 😊

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      1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        Mention not dear 😊. That’s good. He must make you happy. You’re too good and you deserve to be happy 😊.
        Hahaha… Niiiicccceeee
        I want to keep reading but you aren’t writing much… Even this is a forced post as you said..

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      2. Heart to soul. Post author

        Yeah this is! Absolutely a forced post. I was threatened to write it asap and then post it.
        Now you know that I am divided, so you must also know that I am suffering lack of time. But I’ll try to keep writing sir! Thankyou so much. 😊

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  2. Books N Me

    Besides the heart touching story that it conveys, I loved the fluidity of your writing in this poem. How smoothly all the little bits glide from one to another, and ultimately forming a beautiful love story. Great job. 👌👌

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