Yes, it begun with a conversation we shared,
Followed by a connection, unprepared.
Discussion of mutual likes and dislikes,
Lead to the opening of new files.
I was lost in the person so genuine,
He slowly controlled all my laughs and grins.
He held me strong with all his might,
And then came an unsaid fight.
I left to protect us from a ruin,
A flying balloon encountered a tiny pin.
Our inner world was all shattered,
Happiness, smiles and peace, all scattered.
Then, came a moment I realized,
I am into a love trap, I always despised.
I ran to him and held him tight,
Our dark world was followed by a light.
Gradually, we found our way out.
And became each other’s whereabout.
And finally, I am reserved,
With the best one I deserved.
And with the passing night that we share,
We giggle and spread carefree whispers in air.
Wow dear.. It’s so beautiful..made me emotional😊😊…
Glad to know you got someone who makes you happy.. He makes you happy or should I just break his jaw? 🙄
God bless you..
Keep writing..
And congratulations 💕💐💐 Ms. Reserved..🔐😊😊
Ms. Or Mrs.?
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Thankyou so much! Well yeah, he makes me happy and adds up to my existing happiness. Oh well, I would complain when he fails at this, then you can break his jaw. Ps:- that time would never come. God forbid. You, stay blessed too. Hahaha. Reality wise a miss, and an imaginary Mrs. Keep reading. 😊
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Mention not dear 😊. That’s good. He must make you happy. You’re too good and you deserve to be happy 😊.
Hahaha… Niiiicccceeee
I want to keep reading but you aren’t writing much… Even this is a forced post as you said..
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Yeah this is! Absolutely a forced post. I was threatened to write it asap and then post it.
Now you know that I am divided, so you must also know that I am suffering lack of time. But I’ll try to keep writing sir! Thankyou so much. 😊
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I can understand. But TIME can be arranged for friends ANYTIME.😊😊
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Wowww..soo beautiful
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Thanks dear. 😊
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Wow awesome words penned
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Thankyou so much. 😊
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Welcome
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Your careless whispers are so good to read Bhavika! Well composed!
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Coming from someone like you, I am glad I did a good job. Thankyou so much. 😊 please keep visiting.
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Yeah!!! Someone found someone 😜
Bhavika presented it as a gift to someone na.. I know …
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Utkarsh! My God. You are one hell of an omniscient haan😂
Yeah! It is a present of my admiration towards someone! But a forced post though.! 😂😜
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Forced😂😂… Well be positive… And I want party😅😅
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Sure. 😄 Whenever you pay a visit to Bhopal, party will be awaiting for you.
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Ok… Abh toh ana padega Bhopal😋
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Besides the heart touching story that it conveys, I loved the fluidity of your writing in this poem. How smoothly all the little bits glide from one to another, and ultimately forming a beautiful love story. Great job. 👌👌
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Thankyou so much. I am glad you liked it and just so you know, I liked your comment. Finally, someone noticed my writing instead of just “love story”😂 Many thanks. Keep visiting. ☺️
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When emotions are true, feelings are honest, words flow like a river and reach the vast oceans of heart..
God bless u..keep writing..very beautiful.
BTW, where don’t stay in Bhopal.. may be we can catch up..😊😉
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Thankyou so much ma’am! Means a ton! Please keep visiting. 😊
And sure why not? I stay at kolar.
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Loved it❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you dearest.! 😊
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Very beautiful.
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Thanks ananya 😊😊
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… when love is just meant to be…
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True…. 😊😊
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Thanks you came in my little house you’re welcome
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Thankyou so much! Stay in touch 😊
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Sure🌺
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Nice BLOG!!!
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Thankyou so much. Keep visiting. 😄
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Nice post
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Thankyou so much. Keep visiting 😊
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nice…
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Thanks alot.
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Thankyou Aman! 😊
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👌👌👌
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☺️
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mesmerized by the words 🙂
PS : Thanks for visiting 🙂 means a lot
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Thankyou so much. I loved your blog. 😊
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Thanks for visiting 🙂
Glad u liked 🙂
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Written from the bottom of the heart
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Absolutely! Thankyou so much. ☺️
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So beautifully written dude!!! 😁 😁 😁
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Thanks dude. 😊
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This was beauitful
I loved the smilies and metaphors you used in this poem
You are a talented writer
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Well, writer is too big a word for a new beginner like me… But it honestly means alot. Trying to do a good job! Thanks for the appreciation. Please keep visiting. 😊😊
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loved it
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Thankyou so much! 😊
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Lovely…
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Thankyou dear. Keep visiting. 😊
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You are phenomenal with the way you writes your words. Attagirl ❤
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You are phenomenal with the way you appreciate. ❤️
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